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You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school.

You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. GrOy2
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know about a sport teacher since this position in our school is now vacant. Also, we need an experienced and skilled teacher currently. For your kind information, she is my classmate as well as my cousin. So I know her very well. She is very serious about her education and different types of games since her childhood. She has completed her MA, Bed( in physical education). Furthermore, she has ten years experience as a sport teacher in a high school. But it is a matter of great regret that her school is so far from her home. So she has to spend extra time to her way to school. In addition, she has to struggle everyday for going school. I think all her experience and qualification will be fulfilled your requirement. Besides, her residence is near our school. That's why there is no scope to being absent or being late. Even, she can concentrate in her duty very well. Another good quality is that she has received award from her district. Consequently, she is eligible for this post. I would be grateful f you could reply to this letter with your thoughts about this matter. I look forward to you response. Yours truly, Nahid Begum
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to
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as my cousin.
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serious about her education and
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types of games since her childhood.

She has completed her MA, Bed
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in physical education).
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, she has ten years experience as a sport teacher in a high
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school
.
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it is a matter of great regret that her
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school
is
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so
far from her home.
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she
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has to
spend extra time to her way to
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school
.
In addition
, she
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struggle
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everyday
for going school.

I
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think
all her experience and qualification will
be fulfilled
your requirement.
Besides
, her residence is near our
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school
. That's why there is no scope to being absent or being late. Even, she can concentrate in her duty
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very
well. Another
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good
quality is that she has received award from her district.
Consequently
, she is eligible for this post.

I would be grateful f you could reply to this letter with your thoughts about this matter.

I look forward to
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you response
.

Yours
truly
,
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Nahid
Begum
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IELTS letter You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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