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Dear Principal, Now, I am currently taking a course at a college. The course is English speaking with teacher Mai, the time is 13pm to 15pm. However, I need a week off during this course. Just a moment ago, My mother just sent messages to me. The messages tell about my bird is sick and look should go to hospital. Thus, I have to pick up my mom and my bird form home immediately. I must leave the course before it end and I think will not come back again. So, could you have issuance of leave for me, I must use for leave during the course. Or I am not sure if you could tell teacher Mai about my business. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Cheese W
Dear Principal,

Now
, I am
currently
taking a
course
at a college. The
course
is English speaking with teacher Mai, the time is 13pm to 15pm.
However
, I need a week off during this course.

Just
a moment ago, My mother
just
sent
messages to me. The messages
tell
about my bird is sick and look should go to hospital.
Thus
, I
have to
pick up my mom and my bird form home immediately.

I
must
leave
the
course
before
it
end
and I
think
will not
come
back again.
So
, could you have issuance of
leave
for me, I
must
use
for
leave
during the
course
. Or I am not sure if you could
tell
teacher Mai about my business.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Cheese W
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IELTS letter write email to principal for week off during a course

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