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traveling to another country to work for 6 months

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Dear Sam, I am writing about working in your head office in Canada. This step may influence my career, and I can continue my current work remotely. I would appreciate your arrangement. It can’t be neglected that taking new right decisions may help in developing my profession. Your head office is not only known with its success, but also with its systematic training for its employees. Hence, it is my honor to be there and gain experience. Nowadays, remote working is well spread, and many companiesdepend on it. From my view, I can go along with my duties through virtual meetings and working with my colleagues using communication applications over the six months. Thus, tasks can be done within its deadline. If you suggested my name for the new vacancy, I would appreciate this favor. As soon as I get acceptance, I would start preparing the required papers to travel. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your friend, Zeinab
Dear Sam,

I am writing about working in your head office in Canada. This step may influence my career, and I can continue my
current
work
remotely
. I would appreciate your arrangement.

It can’t
be neglected
that taking new right decisions may
help
in developing my profession. Your head office is not
only
known with its success,
but
also
with its systematic training for its employees.
Hence
, it is my honor to be there and gain experience.

Nowadays, remote working is well spread, and
many
companiesdepend
on it. From my view, I can go along with my duties through virtual meetings and working with my colleagues using communication applications over the six months.
Thus
, tasks can
be done
within its deadline.

If you suggested my name for the new vacancy, I would appreciate this favor. As
soon
as I
get
acceptance, I would
start
preparing the required papers to travel.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Your friend,

Zeinab
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IELTS letter traveling to another country to work for 6 months

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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