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You have decided to resign from work in order to try a new field. Write a letter of resignation to your boss.

You have decided to resign from work in order to try a new field. Write a letter of resignation to your boss. ORENy
Dear Mr. Brown Thank you so much always for supporting me to organise my classroom with advice. I am writing to inform you about my decision. I have decided to leave work in the end of December this year. It was very difficult to make a decision about quitting a childcare job because I have been in Early childhood industries for 10 years. It has been worth working with my great colleagues in there. However, I am hoping to challenge primary school job from next year. I have learnt about a lot of things such as importance of supporting children’s holistic development, promoting relationships with children, families and co-workers, how to deal with challenging behaviour. I would feel sad when I leave the centre but I will never forget everything that I have learnt. To apply for a new job, I will need a letter of reference. Could you please write a reference for me by the end of November? I am look forward to hearing from you, Yours Sincerely, Kanako Okamoto
Dear Mr. Brown

Thank you
so
much always for supporting me to
organise
my classroom with advice. I am writing to inform you about my decision. I have decided to
leave
work in the
end
of December this year.

It was
very
difficult to
make
a decision about quitting a childcare job
because
I have been in Early childhood industries for 10 years. It has been worth working with my great colleagues in there.
However
, I am hoping to challenge primary school job from
next
year.

I have
learnt
about
a lot of
things such as importance of supporting children’s holistic development, promoting relationships with children, families and co-workers, how to deal with challenging
behaviour
. I would feel sad when I
leave
the
centre
but
I will never forget everything that I have
learnt
.

To apply for a new job, I will need a letter of reference. Could you
please
write a reference for me by the
end
of November?

I am look forward to hearing from you,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Kanako
Okamoto
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IELTS letter You have decided to resign from work in order to try a new field. Write a letter of resignation to your boss.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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