Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Those who persevere will excel.

Those who persevere will excel. 73pOX

Those who persevere will excel. That is one of my life's mottos. I am sure that every single success is started from a dream. I do want to be a Software engineer in the future. During the course of my studies in high school, I got a lesson in Information communication and technology, which studied Pascal basic programming language, and basics of HTML and CSS. I learned how to manage a website to make more it attractive, which made me even more incented to delve deeper into the realm of computer science. For me, programming seemed to be a source of unfathomable mysteries. I am particularly interested in the courses Artificial Intelligence and Software Engineering. Besides, I have found them essential for me to understanding of information technology more in-depth and systematically before realizing my dream. I have chosen Hungary as a country for my study because I want to leave my native country's comfort, to learn more effectively in another developed country with the best education for science and technology. As one of the safest countries in the world, Hungary has a very supportive environment for my study and to improve my English. Some many scientists and inventors come from Hungary. Such as John von Neumann, the greatest mathematician from Hungary, Erno Rubik, the inventor of the Rubik's cube, and many more. For those reasons, I am now applying for the Stipendium Hungaricum. And I will learn more about the Hungarian people's culture and the Magyar language little by little before I go to Hungary, to make it easier for me to interact with the local community. Therefore, if I face culture shock or something like that, I will be able to manage it. I am much eager to undertake this challenge and gain new experiences in Hungary. I am sure that I can be one of the potential candidates for the Stipendium Hungaricum program as I have proven my excellence in education. When I was in junior high school, I attended an accelerated program in which I could finish the three years study program for only within two years. I have actively participated in different kinds of science and mathematics Olympiads within those two years of study. My active contribution within the middle school has been continued while I was in senior high school. As a student with a merit-scholarship program, I have the responsibility to study harder and contribute more. I attended a semi-military senior high school, where I had to stay in a dormitory with other students from different ethnicities, religions, and backgrounds. These educational experiences have enabled me to be more responsible, mature, tolerant, and adaptable. For the next few years, the Indonesian government will focus on regional planning for the new capital city. Some of these plans are the creation and implementation of an autonomous electric vehicle. Artificial Intelligence will play an important role in the development of autonomous vehicles to present advanced features in transportation products. Moreover, it is my mission to take part in the development of this technology, not only for the new capital city but also for other regions in Indonesia, especially in the transportation planning sector. I believe this sector industry can produce vehicles that can be marketed both in Indonesia and abroad. Furthermore, I think that I am responsible for making a big move in this field, and this program will give me a great chance to be someday someone who is remembered for her innovations. Thank you for taking the time to read my motivation letter. I will appreciate speaking with you about my application, and I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards,

Those who persevere will excel. That is
 one of my life's mottos. I am sure that every single success is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from a dream. I do want to be a Software engineer in the future. During the course of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
studies
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugegreattremendousbiglonglarge
high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a lesson in Information communication and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
, which studied Pascal basic programming language, and basics of HTML and CSS. I learned how to manage a website to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 more It seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.it isit was
it
 attractive, which made me even more incented to delve deeper into the realm of computer science. For me, programming seemed to be a source of unfathomable mysteries. I am particularly
 interested in the courses Artificial Intelligence and Software Engineering. Besides
, I have found them essential for me to understanding of information You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 more in-depth and systematically
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 realizing my dream.

I have chosen Hungary as a country for my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 my native country's comfort, to learn more effectively
 in another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :developed nationcountry with a strong economyindustrialized nation
developed country
 with the best education for science and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
. As one of the safest countries in the world, Hungary has a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 supportive environment for my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
 and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my English. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 scientists and inventors This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from Hungary. Such as John von Neumann, the greatest mathematician from Hungary, Possible spelling mistake found.ArnoBrnoErnaErgoERORNO
Erno
 Rubik, the inventor of the Rubik's cube, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. For those reasons, I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 applying for the Possible spelling mistake found.CompendiumStipendStipendsStipendiaryStupendous
Stipendium
Possible spelling mistake found.HungarianHungarians
Hungaricum
. And I will learn more about the Hungarian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's culture and the Magyar language This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I go to Hungary, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it easier for me to interact with the local community. Therefore
, if I face culture shock or something like that, I will be able to manage it. I am much eager to undertake this challenge and gain new experiences in Hungary.

I am sure that I can be one of the potential candidates for the Possible spelling mistake found.CompendiumStipendStipendsStipendiaryStupendous
Stipendium
Possible spelling mistake found.HungarianHungarians
Hungaricum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurriculumbillplanbusinessschedule
program
 as I have proven my excellence in education. When I was in junior You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugegreattremendousbiglonglarge
high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
, I attended an accelerated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurriculumbillplanbusinessschedule
program
 in which I could finish the three years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurriculumbillplanbusinessschedule
program
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 within two years. I have actively
 participated in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 kinds of science and mathematics Olympiads within those two years of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
. My active contribution within the middle You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 has been continued
 while I was in senior You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugegreattremendousbiglonglarge
high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
. As a student with a merit-scholarship You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurriculumbillplanbusinessschedule
program
, I have the responsibility to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
 harder and contribute more. I attended a semi-military senior You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugegreattremendousbiglonglarge
high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
, where I had to stay in a dormitory with other students from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 ethnicities, religions, and backgrounds. These educational experiences have enabled me to be more responsible, mature, tolerant, and adaptable.

For the next
 few years, the Indonesian This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 will focus on regional planning for the new capital city. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of these plans are the creation and implementation of an autonomous electric vehicle. Artificial Intelligence will play an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in the development of autonomous vehicles to present advanced features in transportation products. Moreover
, it is my mission to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in the development of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
, not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for the new capital city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 for other regions in Indonesia, especially
 in the transportation planning sector. I believe this sector industry can produce vehicles that can be marketed
 both in Indonesia and abroad. Furthermore
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that I am responsible for making a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in this field, and this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurriculumbillplanbusinessschedule
program
 will give me a great chance to be someday someone who is remembered
 for her innovations.

Thank you for taking the time to read my motivation letter. I will appreciate speaking with you about my application, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards, 