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write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. explain your situation, describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it.

write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. explain your situation, describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it. PRXNp

Dear Ms Rose. My name is Nikolay and I am 22 years old student from Moldova. This year, my parents won green card and we plan to immigrate to USA. We will live in California San Diego city, your university is a closest to our house. In my family, I have five sisters and seven brothers that is why I ask you to give me a room in commune. I would like a self-room with a big window looking at the sea, with air conditioning and ventilation system. In Moldova, I had to work at construction and carry heavy bricks to the last floor so by this reason I have a problem with my back. I cannot sleep at solid mattress and I ask you to change mattress in my room to a new one, which will be soft and ergonomic and will suit me. We plan to arrive to California next week, so it is not enough time to resolve all requests. I hope you can do it, so I do not have to write to the organization for the protection of Moldovan migrants. Your Sincerely Nikolay

Dear Ms Rose.

My name is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Nikolay, and
Nikolay and
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old
 student from Moldova. This year, my parents won green Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).card, and
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. We will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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house
. In my family, I have five sisters and seven brothers that is
 why I ask you to give me a room in commune.

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big
 window looking at the sea, with air conditioning and ventilation system. In Moldova, I had to work at construction and carry heavy bricks to the last floor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 by this reason I have a problem with my back. I cannot sleep at solid mattress and I ask you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 mattress in my room to a new one, which will be soft and ergonomic and will suit me.

We plan to arrive to California next
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so
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enough
 time to resolve all requests. I hope you can do it, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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have to
 write to the organization for the protection of Moldovan migrants.

Your Sincerely


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