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letter to admission commitee

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Hello! My name is Julia Karachun and I live in Belarus, Minsk. I’ll be very grateful if you answer some of my questions! I’ve been dreaming of studying at UBC since I was 16 (now I’m 19). And finally, I’m in the process of filling my application form with the necessary information. Furthermore, I apply for the UBC International Scholars Program. There are some of the questions: 1. Can I duplicate some answers that are quite similar in both application forms (for example about extracurricular activities, volunteering, etc. ), or do they need to be rephrased somehow? 2. Are there any tips on how to become a viable candidate for admission (including International Scholars Program)? 3. Is it possible to see the statistics of applicants, who managed to receive this scholarship?

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live
 in Belarus, Minsk.

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some
 of my questions!

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 I’m 19). And finally
, I’m in the process of filling my application form with the necessary information. Furthermore
, I apply for the UBC International Scholars Program.

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some of the
 questions:

1. Can I duplicate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 answers that are quite similar in both application forms (for example
 about extracurricular activities, volunteering, etc.Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis)
 )
, or do they need to be rephrased
 somehow?

2. Are there any tips on how to become a viable candidate for admission (including International Scholars Program)?

3. Is it possible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the statistics of applicants, who managed to receive this scholarship? 

IELTS letter letter to admission commitee

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

131 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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