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You are going to visit a friend who loves sports. Write a letter about an outdoor sport that you would like to try for the first time. In your letter, you should tell • what it is • when and where would you play it • who you would play it with.

You are going to visit a friend who loves sports. Write a letter about an outdoor sport that you would like to try for the first time. In your letter, you should tell • what it is • when and where would you play it • who you would play it with. wOXqd
Dear Sunil I hope all is well with you. As per plan, we are meeting on this Sunday and I am writing this letter to inform you to make all necessary arrangement of kit require for the new outdoor game that am planning for coming Sunday. Yesterday, my old school mate came to me and informed me about cricket that he is playing now a days, infact he is planning to make cricket as a prfofessional carrier in future. Formally, it require two teams with 11 players in each team however, minimum two player can also play this game. I feel this is the best apportunity for us to try the same. On Sunday, first we will start with the practice session. This will only require two players and small space, your car parking do the job however, for professinal match we need large area to play this game, the ground next to your house suit best where we have have plenty of space to set up the field. To enjoy the game most, we require two teams. just inform all your club mates who are interested in this game can also join us on Sunday. In case, we will not have 22 players, we will ask kids who are playing on the ground to join us. I am putting my 100% in the practice session to give my best on Sunday and hoping the same from you. Yours truly Salim
Dear Sunil

I hope all is well with you. As per plan, we are meeting on this
Sunday
and I am writing this letter to inform you to
make
all necessary arrangement of kit
require
for the new outdoor game that
am
planning for coming Sunday.

Yesterday, my
old
school mate came to me and informed me about cricket that he is playing
now a days
,
infact
he is planning to
make
cricket as a
prfofessional
carrier
in future
.
Formally
, it
require
two teams with 11
players
in each team
however
, minimum two
player
can
also
play this game. I feel this is the best
apportunity
for us to try the same.

On
Sunday
,
first
we will
start
with the practice session. This will
only
require
two
players
and
small
space, your car parking do the job
however
, for
professinal
match we need large area to play this game, the ground
next
to your
house
suit best where we
have have
plenty
of space to set up the field.

To enjoy the game most, we
require
two teams.
just
inform all your club mates who
are interested
in this game can
also
join
us on
Sunday
. In case, we will not have 22
players
, we will ask kids who are playing on the ground to
join
us.

I am putting my 100% in the practice session to give my best on
Sunday
and hoping the same from you.

Yours
truly


Salim
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IELTS letter You are going to visit a friend who loves sports. Write a letter about an outdoor sport that you would like to try for the first time. In your letter, you should tell • what it is • when and where would you play it • who you would play it with.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
240 words
6.0
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