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You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one

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Dear John, Hope you and your family are good! As I have always considered you as my mentor, I want your advice on my professional front. I have decided to leave my current job. The prime reason being the misbalance between personal and professional life. My personal life is getting compromised from almost last one year. I have also discussed this issue with my Supervisor but it all fell on deaf ears. We being in the same industry i. e. , Artificial Intelligence, I would request your assistance if you come across any job openings in the said field. I am fine shifting to another country as well for the prospective job offer. Also to mention, I would like a piece of advice from you in deciding if I need to pursue any further studies to add weightage to my resume. It would be great if you could let me know from where have you completed your Master’s degree in Artificial Intelligence in case if I want to pursue further studies. Thanks for always being there for me. Waiting for an early revert from your end. Yours Sincerely, Krish

Dear John,

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good
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 studies to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
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let
 me know from where have you completed your Master’s degree in Artificial Intelligence in case if I want to pursue further
 studies.

Thanks for always being there for me. Waiting for an early revert from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Yours Sincerely
,

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