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A letter for applying a job

A letter for applying a job e5587

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the electric guitar which I recently bought from your shop. After only 4 days, things started to go wrong. On February 15 I had a visit one of your electronics department in order to buy an extraordinary instrument for my father's birthday. Looking around the counters I came across an amazing guitar and immediately realized that it is the thing which my father dreamt. Then I asked information from shop assistant about it. After gathering all details I decided to purchase it. In the beginning guitar was played well. But four days later, while father was trying to play it it was heard unpleasant voice. However, he utilized it next day and again there seemed to have been a serious malfunction with plug. Furthermore, the instrument became not good looking as new ones. I would like you to replace this musical instrument with well-functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receivimg a reply. Yours sincerelyLucy Johnson.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the electric guitar which I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your shop. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 4 days, things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. On February 15 I had a visit one of your electronics department in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 an extraordinary instrument for my father's birthday. Looking around the counters I came across an amazing guitar and immediately realized that it is the thing which my father dreamt. Then I asked information from shop assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 gathering all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. In the beginning guitar was played
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But
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was heard
 unpleasant voice. However
, he utilized it next
 day and again there seemed to have been a serious malfunction with plug. Furthermore
, the instrument became not This word is normally spelled with hyphen.good-looking
good looking
 as new ones. I would like you to replace this musical instrument with well-functioning one. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately I will be forced
 to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to Possible spelling mistake found.receiving
receivimg
 a reply. Yours Possible spelling mistake found.sincerely Lucy
sincerelyLucy
 Johnson. 