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Although you never formally studied computing, you have been always interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you,but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

Although you never formally studied computing, you have been always interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. yXXgE
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest to enroll advance computer corse in your college. I read about this course from a local newspaper and find it quite interesting as well as beneficial for my future. I seriously want to join this course, however, there is some problem, I did not have any formal education related to computer. I read in newspaper it only for those students who has fundamental knowledge regarding computer are eligible. I also have basic knowledge but did not have any course certificate. I wish to enrollment if possible. Could you please arrange an entrance exam for me to judge my knowledge. After checking the performance if you think I can improve my computing skill with this course then please I request you to give me a chance. I will cover all my syllabus try my best and work hard too. Thank you in advance and looking forward to response from you soon. Yours faithfully, Dholiya Divya
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest to enroll advance computer
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corse
in your college. I read about this
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course
from a local newspaper and find it quite interesting
as well
as beneficial for my future.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
seriously
want to
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join
this
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course
,
however
, there is
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some
problem, I did not have any formal education related to computer.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
read in newspaper it
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only
for those students who
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has
fundamental knowledge regarding computer are eligible.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
have basic knowledge
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but
did not have any
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course
certificate.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
wish to enrollment if possible. Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
arrange an entrance exam for me to judge my knowledge. After checking the performance if you
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think
I can
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improve
my computing
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skill
with this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
then
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please
I request you to give me a chance. I will cover all my syllabus try my best and work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
too.

Thank you in advance and looking forward to response from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Dholiya
Divya

IELTS letter Although you never formally studied computing, you have been always interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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