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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to: explain the reason why you decline the offer express your gratitude explain why you like your current job very much

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to: explain the reason why you decline the offer express your gratitude explain why you like your current job very much qVVDD
I am writing this letter to apprise you that though I am selected for your company, unfortunately, can not accept your offer letter as I have decided to continue working with my current firm. The main reason behind the declining offer is the location of the organization. It will become quite challenging for me to commute because I have to travel almost fifty-five kilometers daily from my resident. In addition to it the timing and working hours, which are the most difficult for me as it will affect my daily routine life. However, the great support that I received from my employer is incredibly unforgettable because it helped me to improve my skills as well as to achieve success. When I informed about the resignation, the director denied it and gave a promotion for the higher post, which is quite satisfactory right now. I am thankful to you for recognizing me as the right candidate for your company and asking you to apologize to me as I would not able to join your organization. Yours faithfully, Peter
I am writing this letter to apprise you that though I
am selected
for your
company
, unfortunately, can not accept your offer letter as I have decided to continue working with my
current
firm. The main reason behind the declining offer is the location of the organization. It will become quite challenging for me to commute
because
I
have to
travel almost fifty-five kilometers daily from my resident.
In addition
to it the timing and working hours, which are the most difficult for me as it will affect my daily routine life.
However
, the great support that I received from my employer is
incredibly
unforgettable
because
it
helped
me to
improve
my
skills
as well
as to achieve success. When I informed about the resignation, the director denied it and gave a promotion for the higher post, which is quite satisfactory right
now
. I am thankful to you for recognizing me as the right candidate for your
company
and asking you to apologize to me as I would not able to
join
your organization. Yours
faithfully
,
Peter
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IELTS letter You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to: explain the reason why you decline the offer express your gratitude explain why you like your current job very much

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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