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You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly, write a complaint letter

You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly, write a complaint letter 2bby6
Dear Sir McDonald I am writing to complain about your service which I recently had from your company. I had my car repaired just two days before, unfortunately it doesn't work well, although it was tested. On the 21 December I went to the car repaired company in order to have my car repaired. You were suggested as the best mechanic at that company, and I decided that my car would be in a good condition after your repairing. After 2 days of tasting my car was working properly. However it was lasted only for 3 days. Now my car again in unmovable condition. I would like you to examine the machine fully and to avoid the problem. Otherwise, unfortunately I will be forced to report about this to Customer Service Association which is responsible for this kind of problems. I look forward to receiving a reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerelyMr Smith
Dear Sir McDonald

I am writing to complain about your service which I recently had from your
company
. I had my
car
repaired
just
two days
before
, unfortunately it doesn't work well, although it was
tested
.

On the 21 December I went to the
car
repaired
company
in order to have my
car
repaired. You
were suggested
as the best mechanic at that
company
, and I decided that my
car
would be in a
good
condition after your repairing.
After
2 days of tasting my
car
was working
properly
.
However
it
was lasted
only
for 3 days.
Now
my
car
again in unmovable condition.

I would like you to examine the machine
fully
and to avoid the problem.
Otherwise
, unfortunately I will
be forced
to report about this to Customer Service Association which is responsible for this kind of problems.

I look forward to receiving a reply as
soon
as possible.

Yours
sincerelyMr
Smith
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IELTS letter You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly, write a complaint letter

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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