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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. 566Ne
Dear Ms. Emma, Hi! I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the furniture you provided me. My name is Musti and I live in one of your apartments S-316. We recently moved here from Australia. To be specific, the furniture is in very bad condition. The dining table is uneven and it makes it unstable. In addition to this, the two chairs are missing. Additionally, the sofa set in the living room is in bad condition and substandard. Imagine how awful it is to not having a proper dinner together. As I have signed the rental agreement, you assured me of replacing the furniture. It's been a month and nothing has been done. It would be highly appreciated if you could kindly find the replacement for this furniture as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Musti
Dear Ms. Emma,

Hi! I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
you provided me.

My name is
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Musti
and I
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live
in one of your apartments S-316. We recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
here from Australia.

To be specific, the
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furniture
is in
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very
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bad
condition. The dining table is uneven and it
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makes
it unstable.
In addition
to this, the two chairs are missing.
Additionally
, the sofa set in the living room is in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
condition and substandard.

Imagine how awful it is to not having a proper dinner together.

As I have signed the rental agreement, you assured me of replacing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
. It's been a month and nothing has
been done
. It would be
highly
appreciated if you could kindly find the replacement for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
furniture
as
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soon
as possible.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Musti
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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