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You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: – Explain why you are writing – Explain why you have decided to leave the company – Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: – Explain why you are writing – Explain why you have decided to leave the company – Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment 75ynX
Dear Mr Sharma, I am writing to apologize for the last night uproar from my residence. As you know, we are in the process of renovating our house, and doing ample of amendments for upcoming function; due to which, our close relatives have come forward to help us in shifting the furniture, the disturbance caused yesterday is not going to be a continuous process. Anyhow, for the above disturbing situation, I apologize from the bottom of my heart as it happened in late night hours and your sleeping pattern might have been disturbed due to us. For the future reference, I will take care that this type of incident does not happen. Moreover, I have requested the entire renovation team for doing the refurbishment of the furniture at their own warehouse and reassemble it in the day hours, so that nobody gets disturbed from this type of hustle and bustle. Thank you for tolerating last night’s incident. In future, I will make sure our presence does not disturb anyone in the society. Yours faithfully, Neha
Dear Mr Sharma,

I am writing to apologize for the last night uproar from my residence.

As you know, we are in the process of renovating our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, and doing ample of amendments for upcoming function; due to which, our close relatives have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us in shifting the furniture, the disturbance caused yesterday is not going to be a continuous process.

Anyhow, for the above disturbing situation, I apologize from the bottom of my heart as it happened in late night hours and your sleeping pattern might have
been disturbed
due to us.

For the future reference, I will take care that this type of incident does not happen.
Moreover
, I have requested the entire renovation team for doing the refurbishment of the furniture at their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
warehouse and reassemble it in the day hours,
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so
that nobody
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
disturbed from this type of hustle and bustle.

Thank you for tolerating last night’s incident.
Did you mean: "In the future"?
In future
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure our presence does not disturb anyone in the society.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Neha

IELTS letter You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: – Explain why you are writing – Explain why you have decided to leave the company – Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment

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174 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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