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Write an email to invite your friend to you to the cinema

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Dear. . . I hope this email finds you in the best your health and spirits. As you know, the movie is coming out soon and I would like to invite you to go to the cinema with me this weekend. I am sure you will enjoy the movie and I will try to explain things to you if you like. The movie is called " Father Old" and produced this year and it was directed by one of the best film directors of that time. The unique thing about this film is talking about the feelings of family members and especially about the father and son, the father sacrificed everything without thinking about himself. It is considered the best movie theater drama at the moment because it touches the hearts of viewers. I quite believe that watching this movie will answer many of your questions about the hidden corners of family members about their feelings for their family, especially their father. I prepared everything during movie time and there's water and popcorn you like Looking forward to spending a great time this weekend over a movie! Best regards,
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I hope this email finds you in the best your health and spirits. As you know, the
movie
is coming out
soon
and I would like to invite you to go to the cinema with me this weekend. I am sure you will enjoy the
movie
and I will try to
explain
things to you if you like. The
movie
is called
"
Father
Old
"
and produced this year and it
was directed
by one of the best film directors of that time. The unique thing about this film is talking about the feelings of family members and
especially
about the
father
and son, the
father
sacrificed everything without thinking about himself.

It
is considered
the best
movie
theater drama at the moment
because
it touches the hearts of viewers.

I quite believe that watching this
movie
will answer
many
of your questions about the hidden corners of family members about their feelings for their family,
especially
their
father
. I prepared everything during
movie
time and there's water and popcorn you like

Looking forward to spending a great time this weekend over a movie!

Best regards,
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5 paragraphs
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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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