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Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary /unpaid work.

Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary /unpaid work. gGr8A
I am writing this regarding to show my interest to do unpaid work in the museum, which i read from the news paper last sunday. That, you are looking for a person, who work as voluntary. I am keen about art since my childhood. So, this will a great opportunity for me to learn more about art. As, I am a student of history, I have done my graduation with history and art, recently. Nowadays i want to utilize my free time to do job, which I love. I also have computer skill, that will aid for some issue. Thus, can confer me a bunch of benefits in my future. This museum is not far from my home. So, it will convineant for me to come. I am available from 7 a. m to 8 p. m except on Sunday. If, you decide to hire me, I can strat right away. I am hopping to hear a positive response from you. your faithfully, john peter.
I am writing this
regarding to
show
my interest to do unpaid work in the museum, which
i
read from the
news paper
last
sunday
. That, you are looking for a person, who work as voluntary. I am keen about art since my childhood.
So
, this will a great opportunity for me to learn more about art. As, I am a student of history, I have done my graduation with history and art, recently. Nowadays
i
want to utilize my free time to do job, which I
love
. I
also
have computer
skill
, that will aid for
some
issue.
Thus
, can confer me a bunch of benefits in my future. This museum is not far from my home.
So
, it will
convineant
for me to
come
. I am available from 7 a. m to 8 p. m except on Sunday. If, you decide to hire me, I can
strat
right away. I am hopping to hear a
positive
response from you.
your
faithfully
, john peter.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary /unpaid work.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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