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SAMPLE QUESTION Write a letter to the hotel manager about a bad experience you had while staying there . Include the following in your letter: • • • • Where and when did you stay? What had happened? How did you managed during that time Suggest a solution for the situation .

SAMPLE QUESTION Write a letter to the hotel manager about a bad experience you had while staying there. Include the following in your letter: • • • • Where and when did you stay? What had happened? How did you managed during that time Suggest a solution for the situation. kerr2

Dear Sir/ madam, I am shilpa Sudarsanan, i have visited your hotel during the last summer and stayed there for a week from 20th April to 26th April along with family in munnar. I am writing this letter to bring your kind attention towards an unpleasant event i had to face white in your hotel. There was a need for us to have quality fruits and vegetable purees to feed the child, as i stayed with my family. According to my complaint i have informed the room service about the demand and they were agreed to provide it. But the food what they had brought us caused gastric problems in our child. On the very next day also they provided with the same inadequate quality food for the baby. This made us feel so anxious and worried about the health of our child. To over come this situation i brought some baby foods from the local store and prepared with the very little equipments we had with us. It was really a bad experience, as i had great expectation from the reviews i gone through online especially for family. More over i payed 1500 rupees for the food what they have provided and in that 5000 was an extra charge for the baby foods, as its not a small amount for a baby per day, i would request you to refund against my payment for the same or else i will raise a complaint to the higher authority. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, SD/ Shilpa Sudarsanan.

Dear Sir/ madam,

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 had to face white in your hotel.

There was a need for us to have quality fruits and vegetable 'purees' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "purées"purées
purees
 to feed the child, as Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 stayed with my family. According to my complaint Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have informed the room service about the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).demand, and
demand and
 they were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to provide it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 what they had brought us caused gastric problems in our child. On the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
next
 day also
 they provided with the same inadequate quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 for the baby. This made us feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 anxious and worried about the health of our child.

To over This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 this situation Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 brought This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 baby You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 from the local store and prepared with the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 equipments we had with us.

It was really
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 experience, as Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had great expectation from the reviews Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 gone through online especially
 for family. More over Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
Only in a nautical context 'payed' is an acceptable past tense form of 'pay'. Please check!paid
payed
 1500 rupees for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 what they have provided and in that 5000 was an extra charge for the baby You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
, as its not a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 amount for a baby per day, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would request you to refund against my payment for the same or else Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will raise a complaint to the higher authority.

Looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you.

Yours faithfully
,

SD/

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Shilpa
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Sudarsanan
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