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write a letter to friend about your visit in his new home

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Hi Harun, How are you? I hope you are doing great. I’m glad that you invited me to visit your new home last week and it was amazing to see how beautiful your new house is! I can’t forget the eye-catching hill view from your bedroom which I enjoyed the most. I must say you have a good taste of decoration by seeing your living room and the way you implemented your knowledge of smart technologies in the house. The wonderful location of the house is the best part that I want to think again and your neighbors are very friendly as they invited me to visit their house as well. The barbeque party we arranged in the back yard of your house was so enjoyable where we played different card games during our tasty supper. Next month I want to take off for 3 days from my work and spend quality time with you at my place. Let me know when you want to visit me. It would be great to catch up again soon. Give my love to everyone in the family. Take care, Syed
Hi
Harun
,

How are you? I hope you are doing great. I’m glad that you invited me to visit your new home last week and it was amazing to
see
how
beautiful
your new
house
is!

I
can’t forget the eye-catching hill view from your bedroom which I enjoyed the most.
I
must
say you have a
good
taste of decoration by seeing your living room and the way you implemented your knowledge of smart technologies in the
house
. The wonderful location of the
house
is the best part that I want to
think
again and your neighbors are
very
friendly as they invited me to visit their
house
as well
.

The
barbeque
party we arranged in the back yard of your
house
was
so
enjoyable where we played
different
card games during our tasty supper.
Next
month I want to take off for 3 days from my work and spend quality time with you at my place.
Let
me know when you want to visit me.

It would be great to catch up again
soon
. Give my
love
to everyone in the family.

Take care,

Syed
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IELTS letter write a letter to friend about your visit in his new home

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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