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Ms Nina Gill Cardiac Rehabilitation Nurse Specialist Cardiac Rehabilitation Clinic 41 Jones Street Adelaide 09/07/2017 Dear Ms Gill Re:Ms Kylie Weiss Age:65 years I am writing to refer Ms Weiss who requires assistance and management at your service as she had an emergency angioplasty and stenting owing to myocardial infraction.She is being discharged today. Ms Weiss is a taxi driver whose diet consist of almost exclusively fast food,and her medical and family histories are remarkable for previously untreated dyslipodaemia,and heart diseases respectively. Post-operatively,Ms Weiss's lab report conveyed high cholesterol levels; however,she is educated regarding management of risk factors includes low cholesterol diet and weight loss. It would be greatly appreciated,if you could ensure adherence to the recommended medication regimen,diet plan and exercises. Subsequently, please re-inforce Ms Weiss's understanding about myocardial infraction and management of it's risk factors for

Ms Nina Gill Cardiac Rehabilitation Nurse Specialist Cardiac Rehabilitation Clinic 41 Jones Street Adelaide 09/07/2017 Dear Ms Gill Re: Ms Kylie Weiss Age: 65 years I am writing to refer Ms Weiss who requires assistance and management at your service as she had an emergency angioplasty and stenting owing to myocardial infraction. She is being discharged today. Ms Weiss is a taxi driver whose diet consist of almost exclusively fast food, and her medical and family histories are remarkable for previously untreated dyslipodaemia, and heart diseases respectively. Post-operatively, Ms Weiss's lab report conveyed high cholesterol levels; however, she is educated regarding management of risk factors includes low cholesterol diet and weight loss. It would be greatly appreciated, if you could ensure adherence to the recommended medication regimen, diet plan and exercises. Subsequently, please re-inforce Ms Weiss's understanding about myocardial infraction and management of it's risk factors for gGNPA
I am writing to refer Ms Weiss who requires assistance and management at your service as she had an emergency angioplasty and stenting owing to myocardial infraction. She is being discharged today. Ms Weiss is a taxi driver whose diet consist of almost exclusively fast food, and her medical and family histories are remarkable for previously untreated dyslipodaemia, and heart diseases respectively. Post-operatively, Ms Weiss's lab report conveyed high cholesterol levels; however, she is educated regarding management of risk factors includes low cholesterol diet and weight loss. It would be greatly appreciated, if you could ensure adherence to the recommended medication regimen, diet plan and exercises. Subsequently, please re-inforce Ms Weiss's understanding about myocardial infraction and management of it's risk factors for an improved quality of life. Should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely Registered Nurse St. Luke's Hospital
I am writing to refer Ms Weiss who requires assistance and management at your service as she had an emergency angioplasty and
stenting
owing to myocardial infraction. She is
being discharged
today
.

Ms Weiss is a taxi driver whose diet consist of almost exclusively
fast
food, and her medical and family histories are remarkable for previously untreated
dyslipodaemia
, and heart diseases
respectively
.

Post-
operatively
, Ms Weiss's lab report conveyed high cholesterol levels;
however
, she
is educated
regarding management of
risk
factors includes low cholesterol diet and weight loss.

It would be
greatly
appreciated, if you could ensure adherence to the recommended medication regimen, diet plan and exercises.
Subsequently
,
please
re-inforce
Ms Weiss's understanding about myocardial infraction and management of it's
risk
factors for an
improved
quality of life.

Should you have any queries,
please
do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours
sincerely


Registered Nurse

St. Luke's Hospital
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IELTS letter Ms Nina Gill Cardiac Rehabilitation Nurse Specialist Cardiac Rehabilitation Clinic 41 Jones Street Adelaide 09/07/2017 Dear Ms Gill Re: Ms Kylie Weiss Age: 65 years I am writing to refer Ms Weiss who requires assistance and management at your service as she had an emergency angioplasty and stenting owing to myocardial infraction. She is being discharged today. Ms Weiss is a taxi driver whose diet consist of almost exclusively fast food, and her medical and family histories are remarkable for previously untreated dyslipodaemia, and heart diseases respectively. Post-operatively, Ms Weiss's lab report conveyed high cholesterol levels; however, she is educated regarding management of risk factors includes low cholesterol diet and weight loss. It would be greatly appreciated, if you could ensure adherence to the recommended medication regimen, diet plan and exercises. Subsequently, please re-inforce Ms Weiss's understanding about myocardial infraction and management of it's risk factors for

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