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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/ Madam Im writing this letter regards on interesting computer course that your renowned institutuion offering at this moment, computer studies has been one of my bucket list subject since when i was in high school, but I was not able to have opportunities to study computer as there were limited courses available in high school for me. I would like to enrol myself to your computer course as aforementioned that it is my dream course, although my backgroud of study may not perfectly matching with course requirement. however, I believe that being able to study something which I always pasionated about will certainly stimulate and be a big momemtum for me. i believe I would be put all my effort and time to study this subject even it starts from scrach. I wish your esteemed institution would grant me a special exception for my course enrollment, and certainly with my deligent work and your well-designed course, my teenager dream soon will come ture. Thank you with warmest regards
Dear Sir/ Madam

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writing this letter regards on interesting computer
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course
that your renowned
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institutuion
offering at this moment, computer
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studies
has been one of my bucket list subject since when
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i
was in high school,
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but
I was not able to have opportunities to
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study
computer as there
were limited
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courses
available in high school for me.

I would like to enrol myself to your computer
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course
as aforementioned that it is my dream
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course
, although my
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backgroud
of
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study
may not
perfectly
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matching
with
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course
requirement.
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however
, I believe that being able to
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study
something which I always
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pasionated
about will
certainly
stimulate and be a
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big
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momemtum
for me.
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i
believe I would
be put
all my effort and time to
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study
this subject even it
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starts
from
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scrach
.

I wish your esteemed institution would grant me a special exception for my
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course
enrollment, and
certainly
with my
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deligent
work and your well-designed
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course
, my
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teenager
dream
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soon
will
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come
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ture
.

Thank you

with warmest regards

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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