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You have decided to apply for a job as an English teacher.

You have decided to apply for a job as an English teacher. rLwMJ
Dear Sir. I am writing to apply for a job of an English teacher at your school which was advertised in "maʼrifat" newspaper. I am thirty-four years old and obtained a degree english philology in the university of state Bukhara in 2010. İ feel i ha ve many of important qualifications needed for this job i am presently working as a English teacher in the department at Bukhara school 21 where i have been for the last 5 years. İn addition to this i organize a course for kids and there i am working as a coach. Because i have a particular liking for teaching kids. I am proactive on top of that i know french and Russian languages. I am an enthusiastic and energetic employee and i feel that i am well qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you doim. Yours faithfully Murodova Gulnoza.
Dear Sir. I am writing to apply for a job of an English teacher at your school which
was advertised
in
"
maʼrifat
"
newspaper. I am thirty-four years
old
and obtained a degree
english
philology in the university of state Bukhara in 2010. İ feel i ha ve m
any
of i
mportant
qualifications needed for this job
i
am
presently
working as
a
English teacher in the department at Bukhara school 21 where
i
have been for the last 5 years.
İn
addition to this
i
organize a course for kids and there
i
am working as a coach. Because
i
have a particular liking for teaching kids. I am proactive on top of that
i
know french and Russian languages. I am an enthusiastic and energetic employee and
i
feel that
i
am well qualified for this job.
I
look forward to hearing from you
doim
. Yours
faithfully
Murodova
Gulnoza
.
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IELTS letter You have decided to apply for a job as an English teacher.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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