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Write a complain letter to your IELTS instructor

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding your IELTS course that I recently took part in. On April 1st I started to study in your IELTS course in order to develop my language skills. Firstly all of them were good, but now I decided not to attend in your lessons due to some reliable reasons. At the beginning of the course all lessons started at their time but after a month we started beginning the course whether at 03: 00pm or 03: 30 pm and one day even 04: 00pm, however I tried not to miss lessons. Furthermore, group members' levels varied from each other, as a result there was no competition among students. On the top of that we could not get feedbacks properly for our writings and speech this was because new lessons would not be interesting. I would like you to change my group. I would be happy if you refund a half month payment. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours sincerely, Jane Brown.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in the hope of that you can
help
me with a problem regarding your IELTS
course
that I recently
took part
in.

On April 1st I
started
to study in your IELTS
course
in order to develop my language
skills
.
Firstly
all of them were
good
,
but
now
I decided not to attend in your
lessons
due to
some
reliable reasons.

At the beginning of the
course
all
lessons
started
at their time
but
after a month we
started
beginning the
course
whether at 03: 00pm or 03: 30 pm and one day even 04: 00pm,
however
I tried not to miss
lessons
.
Furthermore
, group members' levels varied from each other,
as a result
there was no competition among students. On the top of that we could not
get
feedbacks
properly
for our writings and speech this was
because
new
lessons
would not be interesting.

I would like you to
change
my group. I would be happy if you refund a half month payment.

I
look forward to receiving a reply.

Yours
sincerely
, Jane Brown.
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IELTS letter Write a complain letter to your IELTS instructor

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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