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you have decided to apply for a job as a guide was advertised in the newspaper.it was posted by Mr.Johnson ,direktor of the "Touristic company"of Samarkand ,Uzbekistan.

you have decided to apply for a job as a guide was advertised in the newspaper. it was posted by Mr. Johnson, direktor of the "Touristic company"of Samarkand, Uzbekistan. 25dYM
Dear Mr. AlimovI am writing to apply for a job of a guide at you touristic company, which i saw advertised in the newspaper. I am thirty-seven years old and i obtained a Bachelor degree in English and German in Samarkand State institute of Foreign Languages in 2002-2006 s. I feel i have important qualifications which i needed for this job. I am presently working at the kindergarten, where i have been for the last one year. In addition, i participated in computer cource. I can speak German. Russian and English languages. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am interested in several outdoor activities such as planting flowers. watering, driving car. I am sociable and i can get on well with new people easily. if you liked me attend an interview, i would be able to come at any time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. your faithfully azimova Dildora
Dear Mr.
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AlimovI
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writing to apply for a job of a guide at you touristic
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company
, which
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advertised in the newspaper. I am thirty-seven years
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and
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i
obtained a Bachelor degree in English and German in Samarkand State institute of Foreign Languages in 2002-2006 s. I feel
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i
have
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important
qualifications which
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needed for this job.
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I
am
presently
working at the kindergarten, where
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i
have been for the last one year.
In addition
,
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i
participated in computer
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cource
. I can speak German. Russian and English languages. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
. I
am interested
in several outdoor activities such as planting flowers.
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watering
, driving car. I am sociable and
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i
can
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get
on well with new
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people
easily
.
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if
you liked me attend an interview,
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i
would be able to
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come
at any time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
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your
faithfully
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azimova
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Dildora
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IELTS letter you have decided to apply for a job as a guide was advertised in the newspaper. it was posted by Mr. Johnson, direktor of the "Touristic company"of Samarkand, Uzbekistan.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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