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you have decided to apply for a job as a guide was advertised in the newspaper.it was posted by Mr.Johnson ,direktor of the "Touristic company"of Samarkand ,Uzbekistan.

you have decided to apply for a job as a guide was advertised in the newspaper. it was posted by Mr. Johnson, direktor of the "Touristic company"of Samarkand, Uzbekistan. 25dYM

Dear Mr. AlimovI am writing to apply for a job of a guide at you touristic company, which i saw advertised in the newspaper. I am thirty-seven years old and i obtained a Bachelor degree in English and German in Samarkand State institute of Foreign Languages in 2002-2006 s. I feel i have important qualifications which i needed for this job. I am presently working at the kindergarten, where i have been for the last one year. In addition, i participated in computer cource. I can speak German. Russian and English languages. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am interested in several outdoor activities such as planting flowers. watering, driving car. I am sociable and i can get on well with new people easily. if you liked me attend an interview, i would be able to come at any time convenient to you. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. your faithfully azimova Dildora

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