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You stayed in a hotel recently and forgot few things that were important to you in the hotel room.write a letter to the hotel manager and mention

You stayed in a hotel recently and forgot few things that were important to you in the hotel room. write a letter to the hotel manager and mention 7Jek2
Dear Sir/ Madam, I had the opportunity to recently stay in your hotel room Number: 108 from 10 June to 12 June 2019. I vacated this room on 11th June 2019 at about 03. 30 in the afternoon. However, while packing my baggage, just before my departure, I inadvertently left my toiletries and the shaving kit in the attached bathroom of this room. These items are of my daily use, may not be much importance to anyone else. I shall be obliged, if you could kindly ask your staff to locate these items next to the wash basin in the bathroom of room no 108. once these items are located, i may kindky be informed on my mobile phone number: 9455555666. Till then these may be kept in the local locker of your hotel. I shall make arrangents to collect these items. kindly accept my thanks for the excellent hospitality extented to me by your staff during my stay. I will always cherish the wonderful memories of my stay at your reputed hotel. Your sincerely Mani
Dear Sir/ Madam, I had the opportunity to recently stay in your hotel
room
Number: 108 from 10 June to 12 June 2019. I vacated this
room
on 11th June 2019 at about 03. 30 in the afternoon.
However
, while packing my baggage,
just
before
my departure, I
inadvertently
left
my toiletries and the shaving kit in the attached bathroom of this
room
. These
items
are of my daily
use
, may not be much importance to anyone else. I shall
be obliged
, if you could kindly ask your staff to locate these
items
next
to the wash basin in the bathroom of
room
no 108.
once
these
items
are located
,
i
may
kindky
be informed
on my mobile phone number: 9455555666. Till then these may be
kept
in the local locker of your hotel. I shall
make
arrangents
to collect these
items
.
kindly
accept my thanks for the excellent hospitality
extented
to me by your staff during my stay. I will always cherish the wonderful memories of my stay at your reputed hotel. Your
sincerely
Mani
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IELTS letter You stayed in a hotel recently and forgot few things that were important to you in the hotel room. write a letter to the hotel manager and mention

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
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