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Dear Mrs SimpsonI am interested in your advertisement in today's edition of local newspaper "Darakchi" and I should like to apply to be a member of your medical centre. I am thirty years old and obtained a degree in Higher Educational University of Nursery in 2016. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I have injection to patients and also blood pressure. I am very bravest and I am not afraid of blood. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me develop my experience. In addition to this, I participate in Computer course. I enjoy several outdoors activities such as, planting flowers and swimming. I am sociable and I can get on well with new paople easily. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convinient to you, as I do want to be a member of your medical centre. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely! Abdukhakimova Mokhinur

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. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
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. Yours sincerely
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Abdukhakimova
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