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You recently watched a movie in the cinema ,but did not enjoy it because of some technical issues .writer a letter to the cinems manager and say

You recently watched a movie in the cinema, but did not enjoy it because of some technical issues. writer a letter to the cinems manager and say WmbNa
Dear sir/ Madam, I am writing a letter regarding technical difficulties which I confronted in your theatre. Last week I booked online ticket for new releasing movie 'Radhe 2' in Galaxy cinema. Even though I had reserved best seats available. bt it was nerve wrecking experience bcoz of projection was poor quality and sound was inaudible. The clips were out of focous and outside the frame. The theatre has earned a name and fame for its unique amenties. I have seen numerous movie here, That is why I would like to recommend some changes which could improve and increase the reservation of customers. Firstly, better quality projection need to be installed and effective sound system. In addition audio technology should be excellent. I believe u will consider towards this things. Your faithfully
Dear sir/ Madam, I am writing a letter regarding technical difficulties which I confronted in your
theatre
. Last week I booked online ticket for new releasing movie '
Radhe
2' in Galaxy cinema.
Even though
I had reserved best seats available.
bt
it was nerve wrecking experience
bcoz
of projection was poor quality and sound was inaudible. The clips were out of
focous
and outside the frame. The
theatre
has earned a name and fame for its unique
amenties
. I have
seen
numerous movie here,
That is
why I would like to recommend
some
changes
which could
improve
and increase the reservation of customers.
Firstly
, better quality projection need to
be installed
and effective sound system. In
addition
audio technology should be excellent. I believe u will consider towards
this
things. Your
faithfully
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IELTS letter You recently watched a movie in the cinema, but did not enjoy it because of some technical issues. writer a letter to the cinems manager and say

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  American English
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131 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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