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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad .You would like to do a course at one of the colleges.Write a letter to your college director.

You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You would like to do a course at one of the colleges. Write a letter to your college director. 0nb9n

Dear Sir Brown I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about I have a friend who lives in abroad. I would like to do a course at one of the college in this city. I have a problem with my family. My parents never understand their daughter leave to abroad. But I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks. Without hesitation I say you I am sociable and I can get on well with new people. My parents do not believe me how I able to learn plenty of languages in foreign countries. I need to develop my skill and knowledge. I am very hardworking. If I study in abroad My education will be better. I would appriciate it If you could give me your advice as soon as possible. Yours sincerely Nargiza Tillayeva

Dear Sir Brown I would appreciate it if you could give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advice about I have a friend who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in abroad. I would like to do a course at one of the college in this city. I have a problem with my family. My parents never understand their daughter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 to abroad. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks. Without The comma is probably missing here: "hesitation, I".hesitation, I
hesitation I
 say you I am sociable and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on well with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. My parents do not believe me how Did you mean "I am" or "I was"?I amI was
I
 able to learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of languages in foreign countries. I need to develop my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 and knowledge. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 hardworking. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I study in abroad My education will be better. I would Possible spelling mistake found.appreciate
appriciate
 it If you could give me your advice as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Yours sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.Narnia
Nargiza
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphTillayeva.Tillayeva!Tillayeva?Tillayeva:Tillayeva,Tillayeva;
Tillayeva