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Write a letter in response to a job advertisement of company ,in your letter

Write a letter in response to a job advertisement of company, in your letter jow1M

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing apply for a job in your company which I saw advertised in, , Today, , newspaper. I am very interested in this publicity, that is why I should like to apply to be a member of your company. I am thirty-five years old and obtained a degree in Teaching English as a Foreign Language at University of World Languages in 2010. I feel I have many of the essential qualifications needed for this job. I am presently working as a translator in a hotel in Bukhara city, where I have been for the last twelve years. In addition to this I participate in Spanish and computer courses. I am proactive and able to handle a multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me progress my skills and experience. I admire several outdoor activities such as planting trees and flowers and running. I am very sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you. I will be grateful if I am member of your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully: John Sullivan

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing apply for a job in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 advertised in,Two consecutive commas,
 ,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
,Two consecutive commas,
 ,
 newspaper. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 interested in this publicity, that is
 why I should like to apply to be a member of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I am thirty-five years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and obtained a degree in Teaching English as a Foreign Language at University of World Languages in 2010. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 feel I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of the essential qualifications needed for this job. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am presently
 working as a translator in a hotel in Bukhara city, where I have been for the last twelve years. In addition
 to this I participate in Spanish and computer courses. I am proactive and able to handle a multiple tasks simultaneously
. I am currently
 looking for a position that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me progress my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and experience. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 admire several outdoor activities such as planting trees and flowers and running. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 sociable and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on well with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
easily
. If you Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)liked
would like
 me to attend an interview, I would be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 at any time convenient to you. I will be grateful if I am member of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Yours faithfully
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