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You are planning to change your dress. You would like some information about this

You are planning to change your dress. You would like some information about this 25WbJ

I am writing to ask if it would be possible to change my dress. I would like to change another colourful dress instead. The reason that I am requesting this change is that I find another one. It is true that is very beautiful dress when I tried on this in your shopping centre. However, now that I am going to exchange another comfortable one. Because, I like colourful, flowery, stylish dtesses. This one is not some in fashionable. So that, I would like changing another one. I understand that I may be difficult to change my dress, but this is very importantfor me. If it would help, I would be delighted to discuss this with you in person. Yours sincerely! Abfukhakimova Mokhinur

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change
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dress
. I would like to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
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colourful
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dress
instead
. The reason that I am requesting this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is that I find another one. It is true that is
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
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dress
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centre
. However
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 that I am going to exchange another comfortable one. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, I like Possible spelling mistake. 'colourful' is British English.colorful
colourful
, flowery, stylish Possible spelling mistake found.dresses
dtesses
. This one is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 in fashionable. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 that, I would like changing another one. I understand that I may be difficult to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible spelling mistake found.important for
importantfor
 me. If it would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
, I would be delighted
 to discuss this with you in person. Yours sincerely
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Abfukhakimova
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