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You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college. In your letter, you should tell:  how you lost the certificate  why you need it  what you expect the principal to do.

You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college. In your letter, you should tell:  how you lost the certificate  why you need it  what you expect the principal to do. g55A3
Dear Sir, I am vikas, and writing this letter to inform you that I had completed Management course from your prestigious college. Although I received the respective certificate, due to my negligence I lost it on the way to back. Firstly, I need to explain how I lost it. Actually, I was getting back via train and the certificate was in my bag. Because of long journey I was tired, so I slept for some time; when I wake up, I found my bag was missing. I looked for it but it was not there. This certificate is imperative for me. Currently I applied for a job and fortunately I cracked the exam and interview. Now the company wants me to submit documents but I lost the crucial one. So, I would like to request you to issue a new certificate since it is significant for my career. If there is any extra cost for it, I am ready to pay as well. Pardon me for this inconvenience and please let me know when I should come to collect it. Yours Sincerely, Vikas kanda
Dear Sir,

I am
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vikas
, and writing this letter to inform you that I had completed Management course from your prestigious college. Although I received the respective
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
, due to my negligence I lost it on the way to back.

Firstly
, I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
how I lost it. Actually, I was getting back via train and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
was in my bag.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of long journey I
was tired
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I slept for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time; when I wake up, I found my bag was missing. I looked for it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it was not there.

This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
is imperative for me.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Currently
I applied for a job and
fortunately
I cracked the exam and interview.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
wants me to submit documents
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I lost the crucial one.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I would like to request you to issue a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
since it is significant for my career. If there is any extra cost for it, I am ready to pay
as well
.

Pardon me for this inconvenience and
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know when I should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to collect it.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Vikas
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kanda

IELTS letter You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college. In your letter, you should tell:  how you lost the certificate  why you need it  what you expect the principal to do.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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