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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university’s notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and  Give your reason for writing  Tell about your education  Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university’s notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and  Give your reason for writing  Tell about your education  Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. QLLRy
Dear Walker, I am writing in regard to the post, I have seen on my college notice board. The roles and responsibilities of the job seems to be exhilarating. Therefore, I look forward in applying for the position of quality assurance manager. Currently, I am student at Loren Brusque University and expect to appear for my final examinations on ‘Business Administration’ in March. In addition, I have no history of arrears with the CGPA of 7. Besides, My final project was based on significance of quality assurance. As a part of my curriculum, I have part-time and training experience as quality control assistant in few renowned companies. Due to this, I think that the vacant position is highly relevant. As a final year student, I would be able to join the work as soon as possible. To be more precise, my education and experience construct me as suitable candidate for the job. Please let me know the procedure to apply for the position. Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours Sincerely, Nancy
Dear Walker,

I am writing in regard to the post, I have
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seen
on my college notice board. The roles and responsibilities of the job seems to be exhilarating.
Therefore
, I look forward in applying for the position of quality assurance manager.

Currently
, I am student at Loren Brusque University and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to appear for my final examinations on ‘Business Administration’ in March.
In addition
, I have no history of arrears with the CGPA of 7.
Besides
, My final project
was based
on significance of quality assurance.

As a part of my curriculum, I have part-time and training experience as quality control assistant in few renowned
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companies
. Due to this, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that the vacant position is
highly
relevant. As a final year student, I would be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the work as
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soon
as possible. To be more precise, my education and experience construct me as suitable candidate for the job.
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Please
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let
me know the procedure to apply for the position.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nancy
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IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university’s notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and  Give your reason for writing  Tell about your education  Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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