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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - offer to find somewhere to stay - give advice about what to do - give information about what clothes to bring

An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - offer to find somewhere to stay - give advice about what to do - give information about what clothes to bring wBBOE
Dear Arthur, I heard that you’re coming to Almaty. It’s great news because I really miss you, and can help you with accommodation. I think that you shouldn’t stay in a hotel, as it’s quite pricy. Instead, I’d suggest you to rent an apartment, it’s not so expensive here. I can find a convenient flat for reasonable money. When you’re in Almaty, you definitely must visit the Green Market, where you can taste fascinating national dishes for very low price. Additionally, I’d like to recommend a number of national restaurants with cozy ambience and interesting people. Athough it is spring, weather is chill here. Therefore, my recommendation is to bring enough warm clothes. Jeans, hoodies, and coat would be fine. But don’t shoes your favorite white sneakers, as streets are occasionally covered by mud during this time of year, so you would have to clean them all the time. Looking forward to see you. Your friend, Taylor.
Dear Arthur,

I heard that you’re coming to Almaty.
It’s great news
because
I
really
miss you, and can
help
you with accommodation. I
think
that you shouldn’t stay in a hotel, as it’s quite
pricy
.
Instead
, I’d suggest you to rent an apartment, it’s not
so
expensive here. I can find a convenient flat for reasonable money.

When you’re in Almaty, you definitely
must
visit the Green Market, where you can taste fascinating national dishes for
very
low price.
Additionally
, I’d like to recommend a number of national restaurants with cozy ambience and interesting
people
.

Athough
it is spring, weather is chill here.
Therefore
, my recommendation is to bring
enough
warm clothes. Jeans, hoodies, and coat would be fine.
But
don’t
shoes
your favorite white sneakers, as streets are
occasionally
covered by mud during this time of year,
so
you would
have to
clean them all the time.

Looking forward to
see
you.

Your friend,

Taylor.
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IELTS letter An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - offer to find somewhere to stay - give advice about what to do - give information about what clothes to bring

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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