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Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, Explain why you are writing Describe why you find the increase inappropriate What you want to do now You do not need to write any addresses.

Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, Explain why you are writing Describe why you find the increase inappropriate What you want to do now You do not need to write any addresses. eKBLG
Dear Mr. Adam, I am writing this letter to complain about the increase in the rent. You might be aware that I am currently studying in an university nearby and in the final semester. After completion of my exams which are going to be help in the next few weeks, I will be travelling to my home country. I am still in the hunt for a new part-time job. However, due to pandemic, it is very difficult to get one. I feel it is inappropriate to increase the rent at this tough times. As I am from a poor country and all my education is going through college scholarship, it is very difficult for me to pay the increased rent. So, I would like to you to take above-mentioned circumstances into consideration and reduce the house rent to the same as it was before. If not, I will look for a new home. Please give important attention to this matter and will be looking after for your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Anantha
Dear Mr. Adam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the increase in the rent.

You might be aware that I am
currently
studying in
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
university nearby and in the final semester. After completion of my exams which are going to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in the
next
few weeks, I will be travelling to my home country.

I am
still
in the hunt for a new part-time job.
However
, due to pandemic, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult to
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get
one. I feel it is inappropriate to increase the rent at this tough times. As I am from a poor country and all my education is going through college scholarship, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult for me to pay the increased rent.

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So
, I would like to you to take above-mentioned circumstances into consideration and
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reduce
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
rent to the same as it was
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before
. If not, I will look for a new home.

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Please
give
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important
attention to this matter and will be looking after for your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Anantha
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IELTS letter Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, Explain why you are writing Describe why you find the increase inappropriate What you want to do now You do not need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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