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Write a letter to your friend about asking her to take your position at your job.

Write a letter to your friend about asking her to take your position at your job. PWO5K
Dear Ravi, As you already know, I'm currently working with PVDRS as Project Architect. At the moment i am handling not only 3 architecture projects but also 2 interior design projects. My currrent position requires me to design and develop various proposals. It also requires me to coordinate and handle on site execution, keeping in mind client budget and deadlines. While it has been an amazing learning experience, sadly it's time for me to bid adeu to the firm and explore academics further. I am planning to pursue a post graduate degree in green architecture which would require a lot of work from my end in terms of portfolio, resume and other tests. Hence, it would get difficult to do both simultaneously. I'm aware that you are not very satisfied with your current job and the work culture there. So i was wondering if you could take up my position at my current work place. Considering the design philosophy and principles of the firm, I believe you would be a perfect fit here. In addition to that it will be a nice increase in position and remuneration for you. I am very positive that thhis will be a great stepping stone for your futute endeavours. Waiting for your favourable reply. Best.
Dear Ravi,

As you already know, I'm
currently
working with
PVDRS
as Project Architect. At the moment
i
am handling not
only
3 architecture projects
but
also
2 interior design projects. My
currrent
position requires me to design and develop various proposals. It
also
requires me to coordinate and handle on site execution, keeping in mind client budget and deadlines.

While it has been an amazing learning experience,
sadly
it's time for me to bid
adeu
to the firm and explore academics
further
. I am planning to pursue a post graduate degree in green architecture which would require
a lot of
work from my
end
in terms of portfolio, resume and other
tests
.
Hence
, it would
get
difficult to do both
simultaneously
.

I'm aware that you are not
very
satisfied with your
current
job and the work culture there.
So
i
was wondering if you could take up my position at my
current
work place. Considering the design philosophy and principles of the firm, I believe you would be a perfect fit here.
In addition
to that it will be a nice increase in position and remuneration for you. I am
very
positive
that
thhis
will be a great stepping stone for your
futute
endeavours
.

Waiting for your
favourable
reply.

Best.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about asking her to take your position at your job.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
211 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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