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Hi dear friends. Hope you all doing well and satisfied with your weekend. I'm interested in watching documentaries. So, I've just watched a 2020 American docudrama named "The Social Dilemma" which was directed by Jeff Orlowski. ‌This movie is informative and realistic Which can have beneficial effects on different aspects of your life. The documentary provides a deep dive into how social media's design is meant to nurture an addiction. The film features interviews with many former employees, executives, and other professionals from top tech companies and social media platforms such as Facebook, Google, Twitter, Mozilla, and YouTube. These interviewees draw on their primary experiences at their companies to discuss how such platforms have caused negative problematic social, political, and cultural consequences and make more money by allowing "unregulated messages" to reach anyone for the best price. I strongly recommend it to watch and enjoy learning about the intelligence and strategy used in virtual applications.
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IELTS letter Experience of movie you've watched

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  American English
5 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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