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You have bought an item your kitchen oven from one shop. But you got problem in this product. So, write a letter to the manager and explain 1) what is the problem 2) what happened when you called up atthe shop 3) what you want to do manager.

You have bought an item your kitchen oven from one shop. But you got problem in this product. So, write a letter to the manager and explain 1) what is the problem 2) what happened when you called up atthe shop 3) what you want to do manager. o6KVB
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the product that I had bought last week from your shop. It is a LG company oven. The main issue with this oven is its time control and power button is not working properly. Moreover, when I purchased the oven that time salesperson told me that this is brand new and working good. But when I opened it, then instructions booklet was not inside. Therefore, I do not know how to fix it and how to start it. When this all happened then I called up your company. The customer service member had given some instructions and tips to start the oven. In addition, they told me how to assemble it. I tried everything but still it is not working. Then, I called again at your store but nobody respond nicely. It would be grateful if you could replace or fix it. Furthermore, at the purchase time customers service team said that it has 2 years warranty. So, please try to solve my problem. I await your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Victoria.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the product that I had
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bought
last week from your shop. It is
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
LG
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company
oven.

The main issue with this oven is its time control and power button is not working
properly
.
Moreover
, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
the oven that time salesperson
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that this is brand new and working
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good
.
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But
when I opened it, then
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "instructions'" or "instruction's"?
instructions
booklet was not inside.
Therefore
, I do not know how to
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fix
it and how to
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start
it.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
this all happened then I called up your
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company
. The customer service member had
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given
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some
instructions and tips to
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start
the oven.
In addition
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me how to assemble it. I tried everything
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but
still
it is not working. Then, I called again at your store
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but
nobody
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respond
nicely
.

It would be grateful if you could replace or
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fix
it.
Furthermore
, at the
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purchase
time customers service team said that it has 2 years warranty.
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So
,
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please
try to solve my problem.

I await your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Victoria.
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IELTS letter You have bought an item your kitchen oven from one shop. But you got problem in this product. So, write a letter to the manager and explain 1) what is the problem 2) what happened when you called up atthe shop 3) what you want to do manager.

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  American English
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184 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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