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Solving situation: Because my friend has a new house, you need to choose her a present

Solving situation: Because my friend has a new house, you need to choose her a present 0p7mO

Among the three options, in terms of a cat, a dog and a bird, I would choose to buy my friend a dog because of some following reasons. Firstly, dog is a good friend because it can share her feelings and listen to her when she wants to tell about some secrets. Moreover, it is extremely loyal. If she raises it and loves it, it will spend all of its life standing by her despite of the fact that whatever happens. Additionally, a dog may protect her family as well as her assets. One more reason is that it is easy to raise a dog. She just needs to spend time feeding it and sometimes washing it. I would not decide to buy a cat because its fur is not good for her health. She often has a cough, consequently, a cat can make her disease become more serious. Beside that, I do not buy a bird due to the fact that it is very hard to keep. As a result, she must buy a cage for it. However, it is able to fly away when she forgets to close the cage door. For these reasons above, I personally think that giving her a dog is the best and most accurate choice.

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