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Write a letter to another classmate and invite her to surprising birthday party for one of your friend who fell sad and homesick.

Write a letter to another classmate and invite her to surprising birthday party for one of your friend who fell sad and homesick. KGad6

Dear Angelina, I am doing great! Hope you are in radiant health and spirit. I am writing this regard to invite you in a party at my home. This is a surprise birthday party for Nina arranged by us. As you know she came from another nation. Nowadays she is feeling sad and homesickness because, her brother marriage will held on 25 August, thats why she miss her family a lot. Moreover, Her birthday is coming next weekend on 12 August. Consequently, I plan a get-together at my residence. I invited Angela as well. The celebration will start 5 pm but you come earlier at 12 pm for some arrangements. Here, I let you know about the things which will bring by our mates. Angela and Sasha will buy a birthday cake and please you bring some drinks. I shall cook a pizza and some Snacks for party. I hope she will feel better and happy. I am looking forward to hear you. With Regards, Levels.

Dear Angelina, I am doing great! Hope you are in radiant health and spirit. I am writing this regard to invite you Unless you mean "in a political party," the usual preposition for a party is "at." Did you mean, "at a party"?at a party
in a party
 at my home. This is a surprise birthday party for Nina arranged by us. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you know she came from another nation. Nowadays she is feeling sad and homesickness This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
, her brother marriage will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "hold"hold
held
 on 25 August, Possible spelling mistake foundthat's
thats
 why she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "misses", "missed".missesmissed
miss
 her family a lot. Moreover
, Her birthday is coming next
 weekend on 12 August. Consequently
, I plan a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
-together at my residence. I invited Angela as well
. The celebration will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 5 pm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 earlier at 12 pm for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 arrangements. Here, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know about the things which will bring by our mates. Angela and Sasha will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a birthday cake and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 you bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drinks. I shall cook a pizza and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 Snacks for party. I hope she will feel better and happy. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 you. With Regards, Levels. 