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You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems.

You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. RROXM

dear sir or Madam, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction a product which I purchased from your shop on 15 th of On 15 th of October I went to the shop, which is situated the centre of city Kokand “Digital”to buy camera for a birthday present. Shop assistant showed me some new, digital cameras and told their prices. I chose the last model which is high price. I wanted to run it but your employee did not want and refused my willing and persuaded me it works well. When I came I gave it to my son, however it did not work properly. The photo came out strangely. The colours were not good. I returned it to your shop 7 days ago, but I have not got it yet. To resolve the problem I would like you repair it or refund 50 dollar I paid. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. If I do not hear in 7 days I will file complaints with appropriate consumer agencies and consider my legal alternatives. I may be conducted by this telephone number 97 627 38 29 Your sincerely feya

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dollar
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soon
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 by this telephone number 97 627 38 29

Your sincerely


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