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u have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card.

u have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. XqOmq

i am Ajay Bibra and my customer ID is 115171. I am a frequent customer of yours and live near Airoli. I am being using your product and service from past 5 years. During my recent visit to local branch, i was introduced to the new credit card scheme that was recently launched by your bank. The scheme is called Gold card Membership. I had filled all the required details in your branch and i was informed that the credit card with welcome kit will be couriered to my mailing address within 3-4 days. As i received the envelop today, to my surprise the envelop only contained the welcome kit and the credit card was missing. I am exceedingly displeased with the your bank in regards to the service that you have offered. I want management to take a note of this issue and immediately revert back with the next course of action you want to take in this matter. Please note i would not be liable to pay for any amount that may be incurred on my card during this period. Hope to hear back from you soon

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card
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card
 Membership. I had filled all the required This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 in your branch and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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was informed
 that the credit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 with welcome kit will be couriered
 to my mailing address within 3-4 days. As Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 received the Did you mean the noun "envelope"?envelope
envelop
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today
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envelop
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only
 contained the welcome kit and the credit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 was missing. I am exceedingly
 displeased with A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "your bank" or "the bank"?your bankthe bank
the your bank
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in regards to
 the service that you have offered. I want management to take a note of this issue and immediately Consider using "revert".revert
revert back
 with the next
 course of action you want to take in this matter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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 would not be liable to pay for any amount that may be incurred
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card
 during this period. Hope to hear back from you Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsoon.soon!soon?soon:soon,soon;
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