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u have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card.

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i am Ajay Bibra and my customer ID is 115171. I am a frequent customer of yours and live near Airoli. I am being using your product and service from past 5 years. During my recent visit to local branch, i was introduced to the new credit card scheme that was recently launched by your bank. The scheme is called Gold card Membership. I had filled all the required details in your branch and i was informed that the credit card with welcome kit will be couriered to my mailing address within 3-4 days. As i received the envelop today, to my surprise the envelop only contained the welcome kit and the credit card was missing. I am exceedingly displeased with the your bank in regards to the service that you have offered. I want management to take a note of this issue and immediately revert back with the next course of action you want to take in this matter. Please note i would not be liable to pay for any amount that may be incurred on my card during this period. Hope to hear back from you soon
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am Ajay
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Bibra
and my customer ID is 115171. I am a frequent customer of yours and
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live
near
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Airoli
. I am being using your product and service from past 5 years. During my recent visit to local branch,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was introduced
to the new credit
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card
scheme that was recently launched by your bank. The scheme
is called
Gold
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card
Membership. I had filled all the required
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details
in your branch and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was informed
that the credit
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card
with welcome kit will
be couriered
to my mailing address within 3-4 days. As
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
received the
Did you mean the noun "envelope"?
envelop
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today
, to my surprise the
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envelop
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only
contained the welcome kit and the credit
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card
was missing. I am
exceedingly
displeased with
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "your bank" or "the bank"?
the your bank
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
the service that you have offered. I want management to take a note of this issue and immediately
Consider using "revert".
revert back
with the
next
course of action you want to take in this matter.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
note
Did you mean "I"?
i
would not be liable to pay for any amount that may
be incurred
on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
during this period. Hope to hear back from you
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
soon

IELTS letter u have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card.

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  American English
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188 words
5.0
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