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A friend of yours is going to apply for the same course that you did at university, give detail of course, explanation why you recommended the university, give some advice

A friend of yours is going to apply for the same course that you did at university, give detail of course, explanation why you recommended the university, give some advice EwO8D
Dear Tony, It's nice to hear about you that you are enjoying a sound health, having come to know through your writing about jumping in the university world as me. Probably it's a drastic step that you choose IT course, it's suits to your personality as round the clock like a bizy bee you surf most of the time in computer programing. In fact I have computer programing along with management and replacement skill course, a pathetic cimbination, perhaps we will enjoy the time. Moreover, I would recommend you to join my university as the offering programmes are much convinent and easy to cope with the timetable. Further more, the way to university is just in approach and I offer you my services free of cost which would be quite satisfactory though your mother will take a relief breath, as I know how much she is possessive about you because of the only child. As regarding apply procedure jus go online, every thing is under a click, no unnecessary documents attestation and field areally required. I would say come to me and we will do together. Hope for a property reply, Best regards, Sulman
Dear Tony,

It's nice to hear about you that you are enjoying a sound health, having
come
to know through your writing about jumping in the university world as me.
Probably
it's a drastic step that you choose IT course, it's suits to your personality as round the clock like a
bizy
bee you surf most of the time in computer
programing
. In
fact I
have computer
programing
along with management and replacement
skill
course, a pathetic
cimbination
, perhaps we will enjoy the time.

Moreover
, I would recommend you to
join
my university as the offering
programmes
are much
convinent
and easy to cope with the timetable.
Further
more, the way to university is
just
in approach and I offer you my services free of cost which would be quite satisfactory though your mother will take a relief breath, as I know how much she is possessive about you
because
of the
only
child.

As
regarding apply
procedure
jus
go online, every thing is under a click, no unnecessary documents attestation and field
areally
required. I would say
come
to
me and
we will do together.

Hope for a property reply, Best regards,
Sulman
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going to apply for the same course that you did at university, give detail of course, explanation why you recommended the university, give some advice

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