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You have recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

You have recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do bkQW
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the blender machine bought from your shop 3 days back. The blender machine was faulty and i called your shop so as to replace the appliance or refund the money. In the shop premises, The blender machine piece was working fine, but when i started using for the first time at home it started making so much noise. As soon as i noticed, i called your shop to register the complaint. One of your representatives answered the call and he assured me that the technician will visit the house and after inspection we can decide on replacement or refund. It has been week, neither i have got any call nor any of your people have visited me. it would be great if you can refund my money or else i would be left with an option of moving to consumer forum if no action is taken. Looking forward for the prompt action. yours sincerely, Eshan
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the blender machine
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bought
from your
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shop
3 days back. The blender machine was faulty and
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i
called your
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shop
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so as to
replace the appliance or refund the money.

In the
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shop
premises, The blender machine piece was working fine,
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but
when
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i
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started
using for the
first
time at home it
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started
making
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so
much noise.

As
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soon
as
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i
noticed,
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i
called your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
to register the complaint. One of your representatives answered the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
call and
he assured me that the technician will visit the
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house
and after inspection we can decide on replacement or refund.

It has been week, neither
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i
have
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got
any call nor any of your
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people
have visited me. it would be great if you can refund my money or else
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i
would be
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left
with an option of moving to consumer forum if no action
is taken
.

Looking forward for the prompt action.

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yours
sincerely
,

Eshan
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IELTS letter You have recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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