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You have been teaching English in Vietnam. Your contract with the University is to terminate and you want to continue teaching in Ho Chi Minh City.

You have been teaching English in Vietnam. Your contract with the University is to terminate and you want to continue teaching in Ho Chi Minh City. RNeAo
Dear Sir or Madam In applying for the position of sale maneger I offer my qualifications which I believe will meet your exacting requierements. My first name is Ann and currently I am an Australian teaching English expert at Ho Chi Minh City University of technology. Also it is my draft to function in Vietnam until retirement, and so I am writing this letter about possibility of teaching at your University. I have perfect qualification for conversational English to candidates and also teaching lecture for graduated students at your University. Needless to say, I also coashed the school debating team that won the fourth place in the compatetion organised by English Language School, 2019. As you know, I have been some foreign countries such as Britian to developing my profession skill. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. I would look forward your respond and I hope I well qualified for this role. Your faithfully Ann Brawn
Dear Sir or Madam

In applying for the position of sale
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maneger
I offer my qualifications which I believe will
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meet
your exacting
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requierements
.

My
first
name is Ann and
currently
I am an Australian teaching English expert at Ho Chi Minh City University of technology.
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Also
it is my draft to function in Vietnam until retirement, and
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so
I am writing this letter about possibility of teaching at your University.

I have perfect qualification for conversational English to candidates and
also
teaching lecture for graduated students at your University. Needless to say, I
also
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coashed
the school debating team that won the fourth place in the
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compatetion
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organised
by English Language School, 2019. As you know, I have been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
foreign countries such as
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Britian
to developing my profession
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skill
.

I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. I would look forward your
Did you mean "response"?
respond
and I hope I well qualified for this role.

Your
faithfully


Ann Brawn
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IELTS letter You have been teaching English in Vietnam. Your contract with the University is to terminate and you want to continue teaching in Ho Chi Minh City.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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