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You are going to an English speaking country for some months. Write a letter to a rental agency in your letter. The type of house you want, facilities you require for how long you need the accommodation

You are going to an English speaking country for some months. Write a letter to a rental agency in your letter. The type of house you want, facilities you require for how long you need the accommodation 15gDn
Dear sir, My name is Emma, I would like to inquire about the accommodation facilities you provided in the United States of America. For the reason that, my company organized a six months training which held in New York. Therefore, I need accommodation for six months. First of all, we are three friends working together in the same company, so we decided to share the accommodation. although I would like to live in country side, easy to access the city. More I don't want to live in a big house. However, I need a house with airy and spacious. Therefore, my first preference is a three-bedroom house, and I like to cook ourselves, so the kitchen should be attached. I need a living room with windows, because I spent most of my time watching tv. I occupied the whole day with busy schedules, due to this hectic life, I need to relax so my second requirement is a small garden in front of the lawn, and some sitting space. To sum up, I need a small gorgeous house. Although my training will schedule five and a half months, I would like to stay there more days for sightseeing and exploring the city. So I need a six months accommodation. Looking forward your response. Yours faithfully, Ammu
Dear sir, My name is Emma, I would like to inquire about the
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accommodation
facilities you provided in the United States of America. For the reason that, my
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company
organized a six
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months
training which held in New York.
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, I
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need
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accommodation
for six
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months
.
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, we are three friends working together in the same
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company
,
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so
we decided to share the
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accommodation
.
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although
I would like to
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live
in country side, easy to access the city. More I don't want to
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live
in a
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big
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house
.
However
, I
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need
a
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house
with airy and spacious.
Therefore
, my
first
preference is a three-bedroom
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house
, and I like to cook ourselves,
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so
the kitchen should
be attached
. I
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need
a living room with windows,
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because
I spent most of my time watching
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tv
. I occupied the whole day with busy schedules, due to this hectic life, I
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need
to relax
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so
my second requirement is a
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small
garden in front of the lawn, and
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some
sitting space. To sum up, I
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need
a
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small
gorgeous
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house
.

Although my training will schedule five and a half
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months
, I would like to stay there more days for sightseeing and exploring the city.
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So
I
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need
a six
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months
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accommodation
. Looking forward your response. Yours
faithfully
,
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Ammu
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IELTS letter You are going to an English speaking country for some months. Write a letter to a rental agency in your letter. The type of house you want, facilities you require for how long you need the accommodation

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
215 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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