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You are studying and also doing a part time job. A full time position recently opened up in the company and your manager is asking you to quit your studies and start working full time. Write a letter to him 1. What is your decision 2. Why did you take this decision 3 suggest a solution that will suit both you and the company

You are studying and also doing a part time job. A full time position recently opened up in the company and your manager is asking you to quit your studies and start working full time. Write a letter to him 1. What is your decision 2. Why did you take this decision 3 suggest a solution that will suit both you and the company QLedP

Dear Mr. Brown I hope you are doing well. I received your letter regarding the new vacancy and happy to hear that you think I am suitable candidate for the said position. However, I regret to inform you that I would not be able to join as a full-time employee at present. As you know, that I am an international student in Canada and my first and foremost aim is to complete my graduation. After joining your company as an intern, I learned a lot of practical skills and wad able to co-relate the same with my academics. My aim is to be the managing head of the Human Resource Department in your Company and well aware that for achieving this I should be a post graduate. Therefore, at present I wish to complete my studies and then fulfill my dreams of becoming a permanent employee in your association. Further, if you allow I would like to work on weekends or for longer hours whenever I get free time from my studies and try to complete the sales target. I would appreciate if you consider the same. Look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully Seema

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