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You have won the prize by a magazine, and you have not received it yet.

You have won the prize by a magazine, and you have not received it yet. 6xJE8
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in connection to the competition, which was organised by your company in your Hot Express magazine last month. My name is Kishan, I am regularly purchasing your magazines, and it is very popular in the town. On this occasion, I want to request for an update for the prize I won in the recent competition. The competition name was "Daily Huddles", where the audience needed to provide and upload their diet routines on your website. Also, there was a reward of $1000 gift voucher for the winner. I was very excited after I received an email from your junior editor that I have won the prize. I was in a shock for a moment and happy at the same time. However, now it is very disappointing as I have not received any updates on when I am expecting the $1000 gift card. Though I enjoyed taking a part in this competition, I am very distressed about the whole experience and I want to make an formal complaint. Would you please follow up on this matter and provide an update as soon as possible? Thanking you in advance, and I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours Faithfully, Kishan Patel
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in connection to the competition, which was
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organised
by your
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company
in your Hot Express magazine last month.

My name is
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Kishan
, I am
regularly
purchasing your magazines, and it is
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very
popular in the town. On this occasion, I want to request for an update for the prize I won in the recent competition.

The competition name was
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Daily Huddles
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, where the audience needed to provide and upload their diet routines on your website.
Also
, there was a reward of $1000 gift voucher for the winner.

I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited after I received an email from your junior editor that I have won the prize. I was in a shock for a moment and happy at the same time.
However
,
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now
it is
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very
disappointing as I have not received any updates on when I am expecting the $1000 gift card.

Though I enjoyed taking a part in this competition, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
distressed about the whole experience and I want to
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make
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an
formal complaint. Would you
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please
follow up on this matter and provide an update as
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soon
as possible?

Thanking you in advance, and I look forward to hearing back from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Patel
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IELTS letter You have won the prize by a magazine, and you have not received it yet.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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