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You have won a holiday to Hawaii with one extra ticket. Write a letter to someone to invite them along with you. In the letter: - Explain what has happened and that you would like them to come - Give details of when the trip will take place - Inform the person of the things they will need for the trip

You have won a holiday to Hawaii with one extra ticket. Write a letter to someone to invite them along with you. In the letter: - Explain what has happened and that you would like them to come - Give details of when the trip will take place - Inform the person of the things they will need for the trip doB12

Drear Farnoosh, I hope everything is going well with you. Recently, I have won a ticket in bank lottery for travelling Hawaii. Moreover, I can have a partner for this trip. I like you to be with me for this holiday because you are my best friend and help me for my exam so much. Fortunately, this trip will take place in May and you have free time in this time. In addition, our flight will be done from Toronto Pearson airport in 21 May at 12 AM. My trip will be two weeks and a guide who are opted by a travel agency will welcome us in Hawaii. Undoubtedly, the more we utilize present a guide, the more we can visit a new places. Furthermore, a luxury hotel was booked for us and I won’t have any problems for this issue. For this travel you should have your passport and two photos personality for airport transfer. In addition, you should bring swimsuit and sun cream because Hawaii beach is a suitable opportunity for swimming. If you can be with me in this trip, pleas talk to me about your plan. I hope meet you, Behnoush.

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I hope everything is going well with you. Recently, I have won a ticket in bank lottery for travelling Hawaii. Moreover
, I can have a partner for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
. I like you to be with me for this holiday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you are my best friend and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me for my exam This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much.

Fortunately
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 will take place in May and you have free time in this time. In addition
, our flight will be done
 from Toronto Pearson airport in 21 May at 12 AM. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 will be two weeks and a guide who are opted
 by a travel agency will welcome us in Hawaii. Undoubtedly
, the more we utilize present a guide, the more we can visit a new Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "place"?place
places
. Furthermore
, a luxury hotel was booked
 for us and I won’t have any problems for this issue.

For this travel you should have your passport and two photos personality for airport transfer. In addition
, you should bring swimsuit and sun cream This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 Hawaii beach is a suitable opportunity for swimming. If you can be with me in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
, pleas talk to me about your plan.

I hope This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you,

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