Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

My dear sister which I want to see

My dear sister which I want to see LlJY8
I really miss you my sistrer. I haven't seen you for a long times. When I see you we talk each other friendly chat ourselves and I take information for me. I know you miss me too. Because you like me and I am. Please come to the here I want to see you. When we worked at school we had lunch together spoke each other liked each other. You very beautiful attractively woman all the people like you. You very clever woman I took many things from you. Your sincerely sister
I
really
miss you my
sistrer
. I haven't
seen
you for a long times. When I
see
you we talk each other friendly chat ourselves and I take information for me. I know you miss me too.
Because
you like me and I am.
Please
come
to the here I want to
see
you.
When
we worked at school we had lunch together spoke each other liked each other. You
very
beautiful
attractively
woman all the
people
like you. You
very
clever woman I took
many
things from you. Your
sincerely
sister
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter My dear sister which I want to see

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts