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You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation write a letter to the accommodation officer

You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation write a letter to the accommodation officer dkE87

Last Friday I received an offer letter for admission to MBA in your university. Now I am too much excited to find perfect accommodations for myself. As I come to know that universities provide on-campus and off-campus accommodation for University students. Firstly, I would like to give some detail about my choice of accommodation that I want, I prefer to stay in a campus accommodation because this is less expensive than a complaint off-campus. I would like to stay with two girls that will be e better if they also form the same branch. On the other hand, It will be appreciated, that you arrange a room on the ground floor near to the washroom and a little bit far away from the toilet. I want one table with a chair and an almirah, it will be good if I found one fan on my bed. Finally, I would like to some information on my budget that is between 10_15. And wish to get suitable accommodation in this range. I would be grateful if you could send me details of two or there choices. Your faithfully Preeti

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Now
 I am too much excited to find perfect accommodations for myself. As I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to know that universities provide on-campus and off-campus You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 for University students.

Firstly
, I would like to give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 detail about my choice of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 that I want, I prefer to stay in a campus You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
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because
 this is less expensive than a complaint off-campus. I would like to stay with two girls that will be e better if they also
 form the same branch.

On the other hand
, It will be appreciated
, that you arrange a room on the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 near to the washroom and a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 far away from the toilet. I want one table with a chair and an Possible spelling mistake found.admiralElmiraaliyah
almirah
, it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 if I found one fan on my bed.

Finally
, I would like to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information on my budget that is
 between 10_15. And wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 suitable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreconciliationcompromise
accommodation
 in this range.

I would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of two or Did you mean "their"?their
there
 choices.

Your faithfully


Preeti